Peer Review

Mahen's Wikispace Page Critique

Wikispace link:  http://mahenswiki.wikispaces.com/ANIMATION 

Page Critique: 

- The animation videos are all over the place. It needs to be   arranged neatly. The videos should all be aligned either to the left, right or center. 

- None of the videos, except one, have a play button. A play button must bee added to all videos so they all don't play at once. 

- The animation videos are too small. They should be enlarged so the viewers can see the animation vividly. 

- Each animation should be titled, so the viewer can know what to expect from the animation. 

Animation Critique:

Animation Number: 5
Title: Bouncing Ball
Critique:
- The animation was a little too fast, so I wasn't able to fully understand what was going on.
- The bouncing ball did not flex.
- I see that the stick figure's expression changed, but it was too small for me to see.

Crystal's Wikispace Page Critique

Wikispace link: http://crystal-a-cruz.wikispaces.com/Animation

Page Critique:
- The animation videos are too close together.
- The animation videos needs to be enlarged. 
- After the viewer click the play button and the animation plays, it should return back to the first frame, which has the play button and title.

Animation Critique:

Animation Number: 3
Title: Shake, Rattle & Roll
Critique:
- Each image should be on a different layer and show up at different times. 
- The animation went by too fast, it should be slowed down.
- The title of the animation shouldn't have showed up at the same time as the images because one of the images was covering the last word in the title.